100 word challenge (horror story!)

Scarecrow

I ran but tripped over. Welp. This is a weird thing to start a story. But anyways yes. I tripped over then looked up. I saw what it appears to be a farm. Some say this farm was haunted or even cursed. I slowly stood up and froze. I was anxious to go inside so I tried to face my fears. To help myself, I took a deep breath, then walked step…by…step. I went pass the long grass, especially the dead corpses of magpies and crows. I got startled and almost screamed. Finally I made it but something was blocking my way. A scarecrow. I screamed and blacked out.

Persuasive by me!

The Elder Fruit

I woke up and got stuffed in a bag. I almost suffocated. It was half closed. There was a frui- I mean an elder right next to me. He was very old and wise I look up at him and said, “ Who are you?”. He paused for a second but looked back at me. He was surprised yet confused. “Hello little cherry?” He said. “ H-Hi,” I mumbled.

“ Well, child, is it okay if I told you a story?,” He said unsurely. I nodded slowly. “One time the orange one spoke that—”

“ Is this gonna be boring?” I questioned. He frowned.

100 word challenge ( persuasive)

It just doesn’t make sense…

I am writing this to you just to let you know that the story you had made didn’t make sense to all of us. Why would the balloon kick the frightening brown? And most importantly, what are they anyway? Mr Lynam, if I was you, I would change it to a sentence that can make more sense. Mr Lynam, you’re an adult. You should know more grammar. How would those poor kids even learn about that anyway? I’d be extremely pleased if you changed it into The balloon NEVER kicked the frightening brown.

From Allyson